Alphonse and Edward Elric

Alphonse and edward elric from the anime full metal alchemist in chibi form for the november raffle winner
I've still got a long LONG way to go with copics, but i hope you accept it c:

I'm so sorry for Alphonse's eyes i think i pressed too hard in pencil before i outlined in pen so i think it left a mark.... i am so sorry about that D':
Other than that,i hope you all like it! I did this within an hour so please excuse the messy lines
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Please tell me what you think and any advice would be greatly appreciated